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Dear angel
Thank you so much
You were always there
In my greatest times of need
Never judgmental
Always understanding
Your support unconditional
Everlasting, omnipresent

Dear angel
What would I do
Without you I'd be lost
And just so lonely
Your presence everywhere
I feel
Like a shadow always
Following in my footsteps

Dear angel
You're always on my mind
I think of you at night
And throughout the day
I know how important
I am to you
And I do my best
To reciprocate these feelings

Dear angel
Pictures may fade
We forget the names
And maybe some faces
Yet with every single passing day
Our bond just keeps getting stronger
Time may rush our lives ahead
But our memories are our anchors

Dear angel
You are mine
And I am yours forever
When the dust settles
New paths will emerge
The paths we’ve created together
We’ll lie on the grass watching the sky
In an eternal embrace, as the clouds float by
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Obviously dedicated to my significant other :) Written a while ago, refreshed a little to reflect the passage of time since it was initially penned.

I resisted the temptation to rhyme everything in the piece, right up to the last stanza, where I have inevitably succumbed to rhymes. Oh well, it was worth a shot :)
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:iconpyrox666xpheebs:
This is so beautiful! :heart: awww :)
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:iconn-g-e:
Thank you... :)
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:iconpathunknown:
I really like this one :D
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:iconn-g-e:
Thanks, much appreciated :)
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:iconblack-roses-fall:
*Black-Roses-Fall Sep 7, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Dear angel
What would I do
Without you I'd be lost
And just so lonely
Your presence everywhere
I feel
Like a shadow always < - Shadow, to me, has negative connotations.
Following in my footsteps

Dear angel
You're always on my mind
I think of you at night
And throughout the day
I know how important
I'm to you <- Don't contract it.
And I do my best
To reciprocate these feelings

Other than that, it's gorgeous :)
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:iconn-g-e:
Thanks :) Good suggestions too, but I'm very stubborn about changing poems once done :)
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:icontar1988:
I agree on the contraction thing, but not on the shadow. It's nice to see it in a different meaning than usual.

Very good piece indeed, especially the last few lines.
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:iconn-g-e:
I've removed the contraction, but as you said, I ain't touching the shadow, no way, no how :)
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~canticum Sep 15, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:D good, I like the shadow!
and the rest of it too.
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:iconrmrippers:
lol sorry but i think we both know soppy lovey poetry is no match for despressed, raging, angry, emotional rollercoaster poetry :P

BUT nonetheless it is very sweet.
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