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Push to talk, pull to play
Dream your life
Dream away
No respite, no reprise
Second chances
Alibis

Push to talk, pull to play
Take a chance
Make your day
No regrets, no goodbyes
The tape’s worn
Improvise

Push to talk, pull to play
Let it be
Everyday
No concealment, no disguise
A new toy
Sensationalise

Push to talk, pull to play
Empty threats
I won’t obey
No appeasement, no surprise
All it lacked was
Compromise
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This one could use a little explaining, probably. Alas, maybe later. For now, just interpret it as you want :)
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:iconpredetermined:
I agree completely with pathunknown. Personally, I really like the contrast between the pushing and pulling as well as several other choices of vocabulary. Made it feel like there was definitely some sort of struggle in this relationship :S
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:icontar1988:
I agree, this would make excellent lyrics
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:iconn-g-e:
Thanks mate and thank you for the fave :)
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:iconlifeuncommon:
Well-written. I think it could make good song lyrics.
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:iconn-g-e:
Thank you kind sir :) I think most of my poems are written that way. Fallout from the days when I used to sing and write lyrics for a band :)
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:iconlifeuncommon:
I... don't know if I knew that about you? Awesome!
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:iconpathunknown:
Honestly...I love it. Like whoa. It seems as though I've read it/heard it some where before. Perhaps my unconscious mind picked up on it, before it was even fathomed. :P
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:iconn-g-e:
Haha, thanks :) I don't think I've ripped anyone off, and if I have, I swear it was unintentional :D

Maybe cause I've used these verses on occasion in my various status messages? This one has been a WIP for quite some time, despite being a really short piece :)
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:iconpathunknown:
No, it's not ripped off, lol. :P I just recognize it, as if I've heard it in my unconscious mind. It wouldn't be the first time that's happened, tbh. If only I could some how extract the music I hear in my head..
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